hehe, I wasn't criticising its canon-ness, I find it very plausible. I think Swallow would have been a bit of a Lothario back then bfore his dad kicked it. :D
I did think the language was a bit...serious for Swallow at that time. But maybe that's just me. :D
Heheh, I loved that bit with Louis. As muhc as I loved the bit with Merret and Gilbert. Finally Elkf is being called out on her skanking around. :P